One of the best fan fictions I have ever read! The story is so captivating and keeps you on the edge of your seat! I keep coming back for more even though I'm so afraid you won't have it updated. It's brilliant! I love it! A billion thumbs up! I just need moreeeee!!!!
I loved this, got me emotional to be honest. The chapters were a little short for my liking (I tried to take into consideration that they were notes.) A few spelling errors here and there but nothing big, other than that it was amazing and ya :)
This story was truly amazing I mean sure there was a few cliche moments but all stories have them. The story it's self was different than any other I have recently been looking at. I like how you stuck with the story although in the next one you write for this you should try to not introduce so many characters so quickly, also try to make it flow a little better because in parts its a bit choppy and quick. very nice job and keep going :)